You’re a Wizard, Mikey

Michael Abadie

Miller

ENG 102

Blog Assignment 4

Following a State of Emergency in Pennsylvania, I woke up from a deep slumber (a scant occurrence for a humble high-schooler, such as myself). I had planned to visit the Corning Glass Museum with all of the new extra time I had been bestowed to write an essay about. Horrifically, New York had unhesitantly shut down any “unnecessary” businesses and attractions. The glass museum would not be open for at least another two weeks. A failing grade began to orbit my mind as I scrambled for any place to visit that I already had not been to. Unsurprisingly, I got tired, so I turned on my computer to reinstall a game that had been forgotten for years. The infamous, Wizard101, had been opened on my PC once more. I created a character that simultaneously resembled me and looked nothing like me. My face grew a childish smile, for I had not played this game since I was around eleven years of age, but there sounded a familiar music that I once sat by for days on end. A foolish idea struck. What if I were to write my essay on my discoveries of Wizard101?

For those who have never heard of this game–nerds–the basis is creating a wizard to complete quests, learn spells, and defeat enemies to protect The Spiral (essentially Wizard101’s version of a universe). There are seven initial schools of magic: Fire, Ice, Storm, Life, Death, Myth, and Balance. Each holds their very own unique set of stats, spells, and quest lines. I chose the school of Myth for my young wizard, Michael Goldenshield. I have never played a wizard of this school before, so I was excited to see what adventures I would encounter. 

The tutorial and first few hours of gameplay are nothing unfamiliar. I soar through levels and hoan my skills through various quests. However, the redundancy comes to a halt when I receive a request from Headmaster Ambrose (The Leading Wizard of the Main World in Wizard101). He informed me that the Spiral Cup, an artifact achieved through competition between fledglings of different headmasters, must be won from a world I have never visited before. Wysteria, a world of advanced magic scholars and talking animals!

I humbly accepted the quest from the Headmaster and began my Journey to Wysteria. By now, I was about level 30, equipped with adequate armor, and befriended an adorable squirrel pet with healing abilities named Ratatoskr. I transported myself (via World Tree) to Wysteria. My screen loaded and revealed a whole new realm. The first things to catch my eye are the pigs, dressed in deep green and blue robes and matching hats that drape backwards like a nightcap. They walk the dark concrete streets with an awkward waddle. Mysteriously enough, most of these pig-people carry wands and move with levitation spellbooks. The structure of this town is similar to what you would find in Naples, Italy. Greenery climbs the walls of cobblestone buildings as the sunlight projects harshly among them. Spiral bushes and posh water fountains line the town’s walkways and precarious marble pillars support this world’s Headmistress’ dwelling. I enter to see her standing against humongous, gated windows. The flooring alternates between diamonds of brownish-beige and royal blue crested with golden vines. The spacious room belittles even a cyclops, but is singular— only a shallow, curved staircase separates me and the Headmistress. I approach her, only to be struck with an aggressive accusation of inferiority. The citizens of Wysteria obviously hold themselves to a higher standard than those who derive from the Main World, such as myself. 

Headmistress Belladonna states I must be capable of defeating five of her personal students if I wish to succeed in my quest of winning the Spiral Cup, a pretty trophy. I race through Wysteria’s streets to the Arena. A humanoid horse in Conquistador-esque attire met me at the entrance and warned me of the arduous trials ahead of me. I rush through a gold and red hallway to the first door, The Hall of the Basilisk. Inside stood a pig, Bleys Flamerender of the fire school. His defeat was fairly effortless, for a single Cyclops spell handled him. I proceeded to the next room, The Hall of the Hydra. Kisai Shugenja, a samurai bull of the balance school. Once more, I could easily overpower him with a single Minotaur spell. The Hall of the Harpy and The Hall of the Specter followed. Both had increased in difficulty, but it was nothing I could not handle. Until, I made it to the final room, The Hall of the Gorgon. Randal Spellshine, a pig in elegant red and purple robes stood with a swagger more inflated than the Headmistress herself. He, too, was of the balance school, but I noticed he would prove more difficult than the previous trials. He began with endless weakening spells to hinder my damage output. I attempted to counter with trap spells to increase his vulnerability, yet he quickly shielded himself. I broke a sweat when he unleashed a Vampire spell, not once, but three times! My health dropped drastically, but I was thankfully saved by Ratatoskr’s healing spells. I blasted a Kraken spell that wiped Randal off his feet. 

The Headmistress stood with amazement as she witnessed my inevitable victory. I was awarded the Spiral Cup and made my way back to Headmaster Ambrose. Despite the age and humility that may arise from playing this game, I do not see myself stopping any time soon. I have made many friends through this RPG and take delight in feeding my geekish side. I recommend this game to anyone with any ounce of adventure left in their heart, for it is a primary source of my sense of creativity. Who needs to go outside during a pandemic, anyways?

My Adventure- Madi Stevenson

My friends and I have grown up riding four-wheelers together and really love to do it.  Between all of us we have a few thousand acres of land, which all connect to each other. We can go just about anywhere in our area without having to worry about whose land we are on. Our property is on Davey hill, in Pittsfield Pa.  Pittsfield is a small little town with not much to do, but, it is famous for the Warren County Fair!

On Sunday March 15th, five friends and I decided to go on a four-wheeler ride on some new trails, leading to an overlook with huge rocks. Before we started riding we decided to have a picnic lunch so we all rode to our cabin in the middle of the woods to eat. We ate Subway Subs and hung out and talked for a while. After we were finished we headed out and rode for three or four hours.

After riding for a while we ended up stopping and walking for a ½ mile or so in search of the giant overlook. We climbed up some rocks and found it, it looked over a large valley and we could see for miles! We hiked around for a bit before we decided to start making our way back home since it would take us a few hours to get back to the wheelers then home. Once we hiked back to the wheelers we realized that two of the six are almost out of gas. We were in the middle of nowhere with no cell service so we were a little concerned.  We were pretty sure we wouldn’t make it home without any of us running out of gas so we decided that we would take a short cut back to my house, but we would have to cross over property that was not ours, which can be a little risky depending on the owner of it. You never know whose property you might have to cross over, for all we knew it could have been some psycho’s land.

We made it back onto our property, I was in the very rear, the last person and when my one friend turned around to check on me her mouth dropped. I turned around and there was a man on a dirt bike riding so close behind me we could’ve had a conversation, and I had no idea he was even there or who he was!

We originally were going to keep driving away from the guy but decided it was best to stop and see what he wanted. We were all very scared and had no idea who it was due to his enclosed helmet. He drove up to the front of our chain of four wheelers and shut off his bike and took his helmet off. As soon as he took his helmet off, we were all relived, it turned out to be one of our really nice neighbors who heard all of our wheelers and wanted to checkout what was going on. After talking with him for a bit we finished our journey home, and everyone made it there without running out of gas. We all had a lot of fun and I am sure we will be riding together again very soon.

We unfortunately do not have any pictures from this day but here is a picture on our property that I took a different time.

Hiking in the Adirondacks

I had this whole thing planned out the second you told us to go somewhere new. I was planning on going up to a little milkshake place in Jamestown. I had heard it was a great place to make memories, so I was going to bring some friends. However, they were available for a little while and the day we got free to head up there, it was closed. After that, everything had shut down and I was quarantined in my house. So, in light of the situation, I’ve decided to write about my trip to the Adirondacks.

            I was 13, and it was the summer going into 8th grade. I didn’t have any plans for the summer, so my dad decided to surprise my brother and I and take us on a two-week trip. It was a cloudy day, but still fairly hot, and my mom brought Ryan and I to the local McDonalds so we could meet my dad. I remember being iffy about the whole trip. I just wanted to relax at home until school started again, plus, I’d never been a big fan of hiking.

            It’s around an 8-hour trip and for most of it, I watched every single Harry Potter movie back-to-back. We got into Lake Placid late afternoon and we could see the sun setting, the light illuminated the mountains and honestly it must be one of the most beautiful things I’ve ever seen. My dad pulled off the road into a small field and my brother and I jumped out of the van, taking pictures on our phones and just gaping at the view. I remember the first thing that hit me was how good it smelled. It’s like when you can smell Spring for the first time after Winter. It was amazing, there was a light breeze as the sky got darker and the air was crisp.

We stayed at a motel by the lake and they rented out peddle-boats. Ryan and I took the first chance we had to go out on the water and harass the ducks. We hopped in and went out as far as we could, he then proceeded to try and push me out of the boat but that’s besides the point. We ran over a sunken log and were convinced we broke the boat, so we raced back to shore and watched the sun finish setting. The motel had small cups of ice that we had to get at the front counter, but we had food and drinks that needed to be refrigerated. I remember my dad sending all of us one at a time every couple hours to get more ice, so they wouldn’t question why one person needed so much ice.

            The next morning, we woke up and went over to the base of the mountains. We were going to hike up Algonquin Peak. As the second highest mountain in New York, it stands at 5114’. We made it about halfway before I started complaining about hiking and sat down for a break. My brother, being way more inclined to be outdoors, went on ahead, with his backpack full of all our snacks and water. My dad waited back for me until I decided to get it over with.

            We started hiking again but didn’t see Ryan anywhere. At this point we were both tired, hot, and thirsty, and Ryan had effectively kidnapped all our supplies. Ironically, as my father got more irritated abut the lack of water, I enjoyed the hike more and started scaling rocks and trees if I got too far ahead of my dad. Eventually we made it to the peak and enjoyed the view for a little before asking round if anyone had seen my brother on the way. Everyone said no, they hadn’t seen him, so we started the decent.

            As we got closer to the bottom, we found a really cool waterfall and I drank out of it since I was pretty effectively desperate at that point. We reached the bottom and got back to the van, and we found Ryan drinking water by the back. He felt bad about getting separated from us, but it had turned out he had taken a wrong turn and climbed an entirely different peak than us. Although it wasn’t the perfect summer trip, I like looking back on it for the most part. I’m still not a big hiker but at least now I know if I do go hiking again, I should carry my own water.

This is a patch I bought after I got down off the mountain.

Exploring Kinzua

With the world being in a global outbreak of the Coronavirus, and the governor of Pennsylvania calling for a two week self quarantine, the options of new places to explore became limited. Luckily, before the self quarantine was called I was able to explore a local landmark, Kinzua. Kinzua is an area in the Alleghany National Forest that is home to the Kinzua Dam which was built in 1965 to protect the city of Pittsburgh from flooding. Although unfortunately, in building the Kinzua Dam 10,000 acres of Seneca land was flooded and 600 people were forced to relocate. Now, the Kinzua area is littered with hiking trails, water falls, camp grounds, snowmobile trails and more. The Kinzua dam is heavily used during the summer months for boating, jet skiing, and fishing. 

Although I, as many others from the area, have already been to parts of Kinzua, the Alleghany National Forest is so large that there are many places within it that I have never been. One of these places was Jakes Rocks. Jakes Rocks is mainly a biking trail, but if you are willing to hike through the forest, you will find a beautiful overlook of the Kinzua dam. A couple friends and I decided to take this hike in order to get to this overlook. Along the way we stopped and climbed on the tall rocks. Which is not exactly my favorite thing to do, especially the getting back down aspect of it. We even ventured off the laid-out trials, and down a hill to do some exploring of our own. I recently purchased the new iPhone 11 Pro so I got to test out the camera on it here as well, something that I always enjoy. Once we got to the overlook we stopped and admired it for a few minutes before heading back on the trails towards the car. As we were leaving I wanted to stop at Kinzua Beach, which is a small area where people can go to swim. Swimming was not my reasoning though, Kinzua Beach has a great view of a bridge and I wanted to stop and get a picture of it. We stopped, but I could not get a good picture because the lighting was off. Therefore, we got back into the car and began driving back home. Kinzua is a great area to explore if you are looking to get into the outdoors.

My Trip to Barcelona (Beach)

As soon as you said you wanted us to take a trip to a place we’ve never been to, I knew I wanted to go to Barcelona Beach. I texted one of best friends and asked if she wanted to come along. She agreed and we were off to Westfield on Monday.

the left side of the beach

Barcelona Beach has been a historic point for voyaging for hundreds of years. It is a point of entry to the interior of North America and will eventually take you to the Allegheny- Ohio basin. The Barcelona Lighthouse was built in 1829 to overlook the harbor and was eventually deactivated in 1859. The lighthouse was the first in the world to be powered by natural gas. Another fun fact is that Welch’s Grape Juice company is also located in Westfield.

me standing on the beach (thank you maddy for the grainy photo)

This trip was an all around first for me. It was the farthest I’ve ever driven without one of my parents present. My first road trip with a friend, all happening during my first global pandemic. I drove to my friend Maddy’s house on Monday around 11. We drove through Jamestown on our way there. I forgot that people in New York are crazy drivers, as we almost got in a few accidents. We drove for an hour and a half and listened to some very good music and screamed. We talked about everything going on at our school and all the drama going around. Finally, we arrived at the beach.

me standing in front of the very tall lighthouse while being stared at by passing cars

The beach was beautiful. The sky was nice and clear so you could see far across the lake. The top part of the beach is sandy with driftwood. The bottom part closest to the water is very rocky, with little pebbles and pieces of beach glass. As you walk down the beach, the coast is jagged almost. Eventually there is a part where there’s a little stream running through the sand and rocks. It’s almost like a sand bar, only not in the middle of a body of water. As you keep moving down it gets to a gated area where the rich people’s lake houses are and that’s as far down to the left as you can go.

The beach is so calming. The sound of the wind and waves crashing helps relax you. It is a very nice place to go if you’re feeling overwhelmed or sad. It is also chilly, so if you go I recommend wearing a jacket and shoes compatible with sand.

Wednesday 3/18 Daily Announcement

I hope you all are well!

The assignment was to look at the draft you have, hopefully, been constructing after your adventure and come up with 2-3 descriptive sentences to share in today’s comment section, and to write what visual literary methods (cited from the Tyner article) you think you are utilizing and why.

I am excited to see what you all have come up with!

You must have the full assignment posted by the end of the day to receive credit.

Your blog assignment is due at 11:59 on 3/20 to the site with a picture!

Desolation Row: A Review

Bob Dylan’s “Desolation Row” was released on the controversial 1965 album, Highway 61 Revisited. The song itself is an eleven minute, ten verse, folk ballad that is lacking a single chorus. It is one of his strange masterpieces. The ballad is a surreal collection of verses: each on a situation between historical and/or fictional characters that all have some relation to the cryptic “Desolation Row.” On a deeper level, the song is about different individuals navigating their own personal struggles and the turmoil of the period the song was released in. The titular “Desolation Row” is an unattainable place of comfort and reason. It is the places that all of the song’s subjects are try to get to.

The first verses sets the tone with surreal yet slightly macabre imagery and allusions. It mentions “they’re selling postcards of the hanging…the circus is in town” (line 1 and 4). Critic, Mark Polzzitti suggested that in his 2000 book, Bob Dylan’s Highway 61 Revisited, that the hanging is reference to the 1920 lynching of three African American men traveling with a circus in Duluth, where Dylan grew up. The lines “And the riot squad they’re restless/ They need somewhere to go” (lines 9 and 10) evokes the societal chaos of the mid 1960s, referencing the militarization of the police in this era. But the pair of lines “As Lady and I look out tonight/ From Desolation Row” (lines 11 and 12) make the case that the narrator is viewing the turmoil in a situation of security and understanding. When Dylan uses the language “Lady and I,” its possible that he is alluding to Lady and the Tramp; saying that as a tramping vagabond, he is removed of the societal turmoil and is in a position to view, understand, and criticize it.

He references the character, Ophelia, from the play, Hamlet. He mentions that “for her I feels so afraid” (line 38) meaning that Dylan is using the character to talk about someone he is worried for and cares about. The lines “her profession is her religion/ her son is her lifelessness” (lines 43 and 44) reference when Hamlet telling Ophelia to leave him and become a nun. This is possibly a metaphor for Dylan pushing this girl out. And the lines “And though her eyes are fixed upon/ Noah’s great rainbow/ She spends her time peeking/ Into Desolation Row” (lines 45-48) suggest that she too is fixated on this “Desolation Row” and the consolation that it brings.

Verse three seems to be about a person who has fallen from grace. The introduction of to the subject of this verse —“Einstein, disguised as Robin Hood/ With his memories in a trunk” (lines 49 and 50) —shows us, the listeners, that the subject was once a intelligent, respectable man but has fallen into shabbiness and irrespectability: Einstein being a intelligent genius, and carrying “his memories in a truck” meaning he is the soul keeper of the memory of his once existing fame and fortune. The line “And he went off sniffing drainpipes and reciting the alphabet” (lines 55 and 56) proposes that this man sniffs the glue used to seal drain pipes for a high while reciting to alphabet to show how clever he is. The lines “You would not think to look at him, but he was famous long ago/ For playing the electric violin on Desolation Row“ (line 59 and 60) solidify the understanding that he once existed in the state of reason (Desolation Row), but now that time only exists in his memories.

This dynamics that play out in the song reflect upon the idea that Desolation Row is representative of a state of reason and resolve that people lack and are fixated on getting. Ideas like this are the kind of ideas that separate Bob Dylan’s work apart from other artists.

Monday 3/16 Daily Announcement

As we are thinking about the style and craft of our composition blog assignment (due Friday 3/20) to go a place you’ve never been and write about your experience there, watch Nicki Minaj perform on the Tonight Show! Listen to her composition and think about those tools for craft that we discussed way back when(listed bellow for you). Try employing some in your own blog assignment after you read the Tyner Visual Literacy article. Detailed assignment description below, after you watch the video!

Definition of Craft/Style: How the author describes his/her ideas, events, objects, etc. is critical for the craft of writing. To analyze a piece, one must notice the ways that the author uses words: i.e. word choice, sentence structure, figurative language, sentence arrangement, mood, imagery, etc. When analyzing craft/style, look at a piece of writing from the overall structure of the text to the small details and word choices.

Word Choice: Is the author’s word choice formal, informal, or a combination? Stretch yourself here! Vocabulary: Is the vocabulary simple, complex, or a combination? Sound Devices: Is there a pattern to the language? Alliteration, assonance, consonance, rhythm, etc.? Dialect: Is the writing written in dialect (from where?) or not? Dialogue: Is there lots of dialogue or a little? None at all? Sentence structure and focus: Are the sentences simple, compound, complex, or a combination? Does the author digress or go off on tangents, or tell the story in a focused way? Paragraphing/Chapter Structure: Short? Long? Author uses of chapters, or not? Figurative Language: Is there figurative language? Or not? If there is, what are the examples? Imagery/Sensory Details: Does the writing contain sensory words or detailed imagery? Or not? Format: Does anything stand out within the format (italics, bolding of words, abnormal use of punctuation)?Plot: Is the plot organized chronologically? In flashback? A combination? Is it a mystery story that starts with a crime? Is it realistic or dreamlike? Pace of the plot: Is the plot slow and suspenseful? Fast and action filled? Combination or medium? Point of View: Is it told in first person? Third person? Limited or omniscient? Other? Tone: What is the author’s tone (attitude) towards the topic? Why? Mood: What is the overall mood (emotional feeling) of the piece? Why? Motif: What are the reoccurring motifs? Relationships? Nature? Psychology? Crime? Conflict? Survival? Choices? Something else? Themes: What is the theme (motif and symbolism leading to a message) of the piece? Genre: What is the genre of the piece? Why is this important? Is this an allusion or allegory?

I am excited to see what you all come up with! We will workshop your descriptive writing in the next Announcement on Wednesday, so come up with 2-3 sentences to share in the comments section of Wednesday’s Announcement. Also write what visual literary methods (cited from the article) you think you are utilizing and why.

Stay healthy!

CM

Meghan’s Castle on a Hill Analysis

Castle on a Hill by Ed Sheeran  

Ed Sheeran wrote the song, “Castle on a Hill” in 2017 as a piece of his Divide album. In this song Sheeran takes a nostalgic look back at his childhood. Although there are many aspects of the song that are specific to his childhood, the song causes listeners to look back at their childhoods as well. In his song he covers a variety of his own memories uniting the good and bad aspects of each, which leaves listeners with the desire to make memories to look back upon similarly or to revisit memories of their own childhoods. 

In the song Sheeran takes an almost chronological order to his song, beginning the first verse in his early childhood: 

When I was six years old I broke my leg 
I was running from my brother and his friends 
And tasted the sweet perfume of the mountain grass I rolled down 
I was younger then, take me back to when I 

The first line shows that he is revisiting a memory from when he was just six years old. The first two lines seem to elicit a bad memory for Sheeran as he was chased which resulted in the breaking of his leg. Although, in the next two lines he seems to find the good in this bad situation as he describes rolling down the hill, after the fall that broke his leg, as “sweet perfume”.  In this verse he seems to sing about the good and bad experiences he had in his childhood, marrying them to create an overall nostalgic effect.  

Over the next four verses Sheeran reminiscences of his teenage years.  He uses the lyrics, “running from the law through the backfields and getting drunk with my friends” which depicts his teenage years as teenagers commonly get into trouble. He then uses lyrics such as “made friends and lost them through the years” and “me and my friends have not thrown up in so long, oh how we’ve grown” to give the impression that he and his friends are in the growing up stage. As losing friends as you get older is a common aspect of growing up. His lyrics about not throwing up in a long time to show that he and his friends have grown up and no longer drink frequently, as most people stop drinking excessively for fun as they get past their younger years.  

Sheeran then uses the seventh verse to tell of where his friends are at in the current stages of their lives: 

One friend left to sell clothes 
One works down by the coast 
One had two kids but lives alone 
One’s brother overdosed 
One’s already on his second wife 
One’s just barely getting by 
But these people raised me and I can’t wait to go home 

These lines show that as his friends aged they had many struggles in their lives. This verse illustrates that some of his friends have been successful, while others have not. Although he uses the last line of this verse to say that even though these people may not be thriving, they raised him and he is still attached to them.  

The lyrics are accompanied with instrumentals that have an upbeat sound to them. This causes listeners to want to revisit their own memories or if the listener is younger it causes them to want to make memories of their own. The chorus of the song has both the loudest and most upbeat instrumentals in the song accompanied with the lyrics: 

I’m on my way 
Driving at ninety down those country lanes 
Singing to “Tiny Dancer” 
And I miss the way you make me feel, and it’s real 
We watched the sunset over the castle on the hill 
Over the castle on the hill 
Over the castle on the hill 

In these lyrics he makes a reference to the song Tiny Dancer which is a peaceful and slow tempo song. He accompanies this reference with lyrics about driving ninety miles an hour. In essence, he compares a fast-moving car with a slow song. The fast-moving car symbolizes the making of the memories and the slow song symbolizes how he is now looking back upon these memories. These together cause listeners to think of how it feels to be driving quickly, singing in the car with friends. It pushes them to either revisit these memories or to make them, so they have something to revisit later in life.  

Throughout Sheeran’s entire song he makes references to his past in order to nostalgically look back at his childhood. He uses elements that can be appreciated by listeners of all age groups. These elements may cause listeners of different age groups to interpret the song differently. Although, it has one thing in common for all listeners; memories, whether it causes listeners to revisit them or to make them.  

Text Review-Hunter Peterson

Hunter Peterson

Prof. Miller

ENG 102

February 17, 2020

Confronting Christianity: 12 Hard Questions for the World’s Largest Religion 

an analysis on the in-depth research of the false assumptions within Christianity 

Christianity. The world’s largest religion for hundreds of years with 29.81% (around 2.4 billion individuals) of the worlds population following its beliefs. The story of Jesus, King of the Jews, the son of God, and his life of devotion to God, love for all walks of life, and, most notably, his murder and resurrection as a sign from God that he loves all people is compelling to people of the faith. Confronting Christianity’s author Rebecca McLaughlin dives into not the amazing stories of Jesus and his works while he walked this earth, but rather the questions people have about the faith and most importantly the Christian Bible. 

Christianity is a monotheistic religion, however many people in the world believe that it is not. Christianity believes in three representations of God, Father, Son, and Holy Spirit. Judaism and Islam alike don’t agree with this. They think that God is too divine to be represented in a human form like Jesus. But, these are still surface questions that are asked of Christianity. McLaughlin dives into the deeper questions including: Doesn’t Christianity crush diversity? Doesn’t religion hinder morality? Does religion cause violence? How can you take the Bible literally? Isn’t christianity homophobic? Throughout her book she discuses these “hard questions”, as she puts it, in great depth both in the literal sense and the theological sense. To the average person these questions might raise answers of vague stature, but too McLaughlin she takes on this challenge and clears away any possible questions that night arise. 

When tackling into each chapter she starts with a question, which happens to be the chapter title, and include the questions mentioned before. For example, chapter five is title “Doesn’t Religion Cause Violence”? This chapter had the most impact on my views of all religions not just Christianity. She starts the chapter with a claim by a British philosopher Bertrand Russell (1930) which states, 

“ Religion prevents us from removing the fundamental causes of war; religion prevents us from teaching the ethic of scientific cooperation in place of the old frieze doctrines of sin and punishment. It is possible that mankind is on the threshold of a golden age: but, if so, it will first be necessary to slay the dragon that guards the door, and this dragon is religion” (75).

Her choice of quote to start her answer on if religion causes violence seems to lead you down a path of the unexpected. She then makes a point that “people of every major religion have engaged in horrifically violent acts, often appealing to divine mandates for their violence” (75). So is it really religion that cause violence or people that cause violence? Most notably, she references Hitler’s “Christianity” which wasn’t Christianity at all. Her arguments about Hitler drive home the fact that it is unremarkably humans that cause violence rather than religion. Most religion based violence wasn’t religion based, religion was just an avenue for hate filled people to manipulate people into doing what they believed was the right thing. 

Each chapter follows this same pattern of question, related but unsuspected claim, examples, and finally her well planned answer. The chapters flow seamlessly and compliment each other even with conflicting questions. McLaughlin’s most effective writing tool is her compelling sway of her arguments from unanticipated claims all the way back across the playing field to her final more philosophical conclusion. This writing tactic keeps the reader on edge because you never know which way she will side. Overall, McLaughlin has a firm analytical and educated argument for each question she approaches. 

However, this book is not for everyone. To those who enjoy learning new things about the world and how people live, this is a great book. If you are not interested in world religions and ford affairs, this probably isn’t the book for you. To read this book I recommend having interest in this topic to get anything out of it. 

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